15: Welcome Party

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The Survey of Titles (see notes)

Thanks for sticking with me so far!  One more post after this one and then there’ll be a few weeks’ break with just a few shorts while I get ready for the next big thing.


EXT. DOLINA FIELDS. DAY.

THE ROAD

In the day sky, the new moon is faint behind scattered clouds.

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14: Saving Face

Cue the homecoming montage!

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Help me pick a title!  Check out the notes in Chapter 13 for details.

Update: 9 Aug 2018 – More on the title vote here.


EXT.  DOLINA FIELDS.  DAY.

THE BLACK CAT INN

Noon:  Liev and Pavel cross the bridge, Sasha behind.  Men take a knee and patrons shout from windows.  The two knights eye Sasha warily.

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13: Things Left Unsaid

We’re at the start of Act III!

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ACT III – NIKOLAI

EXT. TISHINA CASTLE. DAY.

THE GARDEN COURTYARD

A clear evening.  Galen watches from the wall.  Cleaned up, Irina and Liev sit at a fountain.  Siny stands at the gate looking nervous.  Irina holds her ring.  She’s warm, graceful, charismatic, but sad.

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